Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Fledgling: Chapter 22

Just spent the last two day doing a major rewrite on my chapter 22. This is the major conflict chapter. As it read before, the villain was a wuss. I had to pump him up.
So after some rearranging, The chapter rewrite started with 7 pages. I rewrote, added more conflict and bumped it up to 13 pages.
Best part, I got the villain monologuing.

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